Disclaimer: I am not a retail recruiter. I am a professional resume writer for the retail industry. Therefore, this post is simply my opinion on how to market yourself, and it's based on my years of experience as a retail hiring manager, employment counselor, retail resume analyst, and retail resume writer.
Every week I see messages like the following in resume summaries, cover letters, LinkedIn posts, etc.:
"I am a dynamic and multi-talented retail executive with a wealth of knowledge and experience. I am looking for an opportunity to use my unparalleled expertise in retail sales management to lead your company to unprecedented heights. Check out my profile and contact me today!"
Messages like this don't attract my attention, nor do they attract the attention of many recruiters, in my experience. Why? Because it doesn't say anything.
Recruiters need to know certain things to establish whether you're a viable candidate. They may be able to find the answers in your LinkedIn profile (although many people don't even include it there), but why make them search for it? It's like putting all the gold in your resume and stuffing your cover letter with fluff - or filling up the first page-and-a-half of your resume with hyperbole and leaving your employment history for the very end.
If you bury the gold and leave a trail for it, they may not be inclined to follow the trail (especially when they have hundreds of other candidates vying for their attention).
At a minimum, retail recruiters want to know whether you have had the desired accountability in past positions. This includes things like:
Obviously I can't speak for all retail recruiters so some of these may not apply in some cases (and others may be more important) but these areas of accountability often serve as minimum qualifications for particular positions. In other words, you may be screened against criteria such as this before the recruiter considers you a potential candidate. So why not make it easy on them and highlight your past accountability in your messaging?
Here are a few examples:
"Big-box store manager with 10 years' experience managing $15M to $20M locations with a staff of 40-60. Experience in sporting goods, office/tech, and apparel. Seeking a new opportunity in NY/CT. Email firstname.lastname@example.org."
"District manager with 15 years' experience overseeing 10-14 fashion and accessory stores in prominent Southern California malls. Led a national chain in sales volume and key metrics for the past 3 years. Relocating to Seattle in July and seeking a new opportunity in women's apparel. Email email@example.com for more information."
"Regional loss prevention director with 20+ years' experience with junior department stores, major department stores, supermarkets, and mass merchants. Oversaw up to 55 stores in 9 states. Seeking a similar opportunity on the west coast. Email firstname.lastname@example.org or view profile for more information."
Hope that helps!